The End
I thought of the idea for this story at roughly the same time as my story “Kiss Cam.” They are so very different in tone and purpose, I really wanted to stretch my range, see what I was capable of. So, if any of you readers also read Kiss Cam, how do they compare? Do I write better when I am tackling a wanton slut of a sister with a mean-spirited prick of a brother or when I write about a brother and sister that truly love one another? Please comment and let me know. Even if you haven’t read Kiss Cam, what did you think of this story? Does the sort of inversion of the Adam and Eve, the Garden of Eden, and Original Sin narrative work, or not so much? More importantly, was this story hot? I honestly write so that I can hear the comments you all give. So please just tell me what you think. Even if it is just a sentence. Consider that your payment for the free story. And if you liked this, I beg you to read my other stories. Thanks
YKN
P.S. – I do one edit on my work and I try to be thorough. But I figure when it comes to handing out free pornography you all would be better served by getting it fast (if a little rough) then waiting for me to polish it like I was getting paid for my work. So, in short, I know there are some errors and I don’t really care that much. Just try to enjoy the porn.
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